Monday 18 November 2013

Halloween Story: The Wicked Witch's reform - Part I

So, I'm finally posting something, yay! After dealing with creativity issues this past week, I finally managed to write the first part of the story. Hopefully by tomorrow I finish writing the rest of the story. And then I will be able to post about two ideas I got this past week.

Crimson Amanda changes her colour


She lounged leaning her head on her sculpted wooden throne, covering her face with her wrinkled hands. Lately, she suffered nothing but failure in anything she did. What could have happened to strengthen those people so badly that they actually resisted her plans?
“Madam Amanda”, a squeaky voice echoed throughout the imposing gothic room.
 She turned her head towards the large wooden door on which two golden dragons moved aimlessly. A short man stood in front of the doors, staring at her intently, the sheer size of his surroundings making him seem even more insignificant. But the woman called Amanda knew better than to underestimate her right hand.
“What is it, Dwarf? Is there anything so urgent that it warrants interrupting the thoughts of Her Wickedness Wicked Witch Amanda?” she said with a cold voice.
“Maybe not, Madam Amanda, but I thought I should announce you that by tomorrow every servant will have left you. I hope you understand that we must take care of our lives and our families and the work under you has become too dangerous. The rest wanted to leave without announcing you, but I have been your faithful servant for over 20 years and I felt I owed you at least that.” the man said in an even voice, sometimes his eyes glittering with tears.
“Well, if that is your decision, don’t expect me to hold you here against your will. But don’t expect me to go easy on you out there either. Once you left me, you’re fair game, I hope this is very clear to everybody,” Amanda said in a calculated cold voice, while pretending to gaze through the open window.
“I hope it’s not a threat, Miss Amanda, for if it is, I wish to declare that I’d rather die than spend another minute in this cursed castle! There is nothing you can do about it. You may turn me into a snail, if you wish. Or even a fish, if that is your desire, and then leave me to rot next to your throne. But nothing can deter my desire to leave. Even death is better than spending another day here,” the man argued passionately, his rough hands rumpled the dirty cloth that used to be a shirt.
“Well, death would be against the reason stated for your departure, wouldn’t it? You yourself said everybody wanted to leave because my business became too dangerous. Why the sudden change in character? What am I missing, Dwarf? What is it that has you leaving?” Amanda said in an even voice, reaching slowly for a pair of silver-studded crimson high-heels she kept near her seat. She could see with the corner of her eye how the short man shifted his weight form one foot to another, his whole silhouette suddenly becoming the very emblem of embarrassment. “Dwarf, I already said I won’t be doing anything in particular to those who leave me,” she reassured him while putting on her shoes.
“Truth is, Madam, that your evil actions no longer deliver the rewards that would warrant your attitude towards us. In reality, I’m leaving because I think I can be a more powerful evil influence than you. Most servants believe that your constant weakening would soon lead to your final defeat in the hands of the more and more powerful heroes.”
“Oh. I see,” Amanda replied walking slowly towards the man. “So I am not evil enough? Crimson Amanda is not evil enough for your liking, Dwarf?” she whispered menacingly. Dwarf stepped back, trying to escape the witch, but with one wave of her hand, the golden dragons stopped their movement and the doors slammed shut.
“You will not intimidate me, Witch. Your regime of terror only made us stronger and more eager to fight you. The time has come to admit that your approach has become obsolete,” the short man said, trying to keep his voice from showing the amount of terror he felt. “I shall fight you if that is what you wish, Crimson Woman.”
“Fight me? It would appear that you consider you developed immunity to my magic. Would you like to test this theory of yours? For example, if I transformed you into a slug, to drag your body slimily across the floor, letting the rest know that Amanda is not the woman to be underestimated,” she said kneeling in order to stare into the eyes of her interlocutor.
 The fear in the man’s heart defeated his willpower, so a salty drop of water fell from one of his eyes. He wanted to ask her for forgiveness, but his pride made his lips stay still. He could feel her breath, the rustle of her clothes caused by her moving hands, the silent whispers. He knew he had no chance from the beginning, but he had gained time for the rest of the servants to leave, since were she to realise that they were abandoning her, Amanda would have punished everybody severely. This way, it was only him taking the punishment, letting enough time for the rest to arrive to a safe place, away from the witch’s influence.
Suddenly, Amanda stopped. She walked slowly back to her seat and as she sat, the doors opened wide, the dragons moving more feverishly than before, as if to express their happiness for being able to move again. The little man was looking at himself bewilderedly. He seemed unchanged.
“Dwarf, you are not my opponent. Make sure you stay that way. But don’t kid yourself, self-sacrifice makes no one evil” she added, looking at him. He understood and left the room.

            Amanda was all alone in the huge manor. Hours ago, she watched Dwarf’s departure from the window, afraid she might show how much she would miss him if she led him outside, and since then, she hadn’t moved one bit. Since the beginning of her career wasn’t she without any aid. She remembered that after the servants realised it was she who caused the death of their master, her husband, they had all left her. For three days straight she didn’t realise she was all alone, having locked herself in the library to study her husband’s collection of magic books. It was then that she decided that, in order to survive, she must become wicked. Everybody already hated her because she was a witch; why not take advantage of her talent?
            As a result, she sent sleep potions to every beautiful princess in the kingdom, along with a letter stating that a ransom must be offered for awakening the fair maidens. Some kings sent heroes to her manor, while others sent entire armies to extract the antidote. Only one gave her the money she demanded. In the antidote, Amanda mixed as a token of gratitude a beauty potion, for when the maiden awoke to be more beautiful than any other princess. Unfortunately, the two potions reacted with each other, making the princess more beautiful than any other in the kingdom, but only able to be awoken by the kiss of her true love. Saddened by this turn of events, the king swore vengeance on the inexperienced witch. The woman was still able to outwit both armies and heroes, mixing her mind-control potions in the drinks of nearby inns. She then sent the mind-controlled armies against the kings until they agreed to pay her a higher sum. Shortly after, Amanda had enough money to live her life surrounded by potions and spell books. But that was no longer her goal. She hired henchmen and servants through them did more and more elaborate schemes in order to get money. She even stole the sun and the moon several times. Once said sum of money was paid, she offered the hero information on the weakness of the one guarding the treasure, making them believe that they had killed their opponent, while she teleported her servant them to a remote corner of the world, thus honouring her promise and removing any one who knew her identity. Using others to do her bidding, Amanda kept herself and her faithful servants away from the spotlight, fewer and fewer people knowing that there was a mastermind behind most evil deeds happening in the land.
            But steadily, the kings and princes started to no longer pay for information on the weaknesses of the henchmen, relying in stead on the increasingly smarter and stronger heroes and heroines. Even other witches started joining the ranks of the good people. In the past months she tried controlling the mind of a king in order to appear that he had gone insane, to facilitate her offering to cure him later, but the scheme had fallen when a healer removed her spell recently. It was this event that made her loyal servants doubt her. If she no longer could do as much as control the mind of a king, there was no guarantee that she could continue to set her henchmen free from the prisons the good guys set them in.
            What had made them so strong? Did Amelia herself become soft? After all, she didn’t keep Dwarf by her side, even though it could have been so easy. However, she didn’t change at all. Maybe that’s what she did wrong: she did the same schemes over and over again. But she didn’t. As soon as she saw a plan was becoming obsolete, she found something else. But now, no matter what she concocted, she was defeated even before registering her first success.
            Why did her opponents become so strong? Why were they stronger than when she first found them, and not weaker, as they should have been after being drained of time and resources for so many years? It was only natural for her, the victor, to be growing stronger. But had she truly grown stronger since she started hiring henchmen? She felt so powerless after they left. Every plan Amanda could think of involved at least one helping hand, a commodity she no longer possessed.
            “That’s it!” Amanda thought out loud, rising herself from her seat. “I grew weaker as I had people to act my plans in stead of me. They grew stronger as they had no one to rely on. I thought I was evil, but I was in fact a good influence on them, helping them grow stronger. Now that I think about it, the kingdoms that fought constantly against me are the ones who have flourished since I started my career, while those I had no interest in or actively aided are now subdued by them. It would appear that I trained them without knowledge. As a result, I was good. The Wicked Witch Amanda was in fact the Good Witch Glinda. Now this is a thought to dread.”
            Amanda, in her rush to confirm her thoughts ran to the observation room, where she held information on all kingdoms, ignoring the cold feeling of her bare feet on the black marble floor. “I’m actually Glinda. But is Glinda actually me?” She continued to ask herself while taking out papers, files and letters from all corners of the room. “Well, maybe it is true. The countries she supports and defends are the weakest in the land. And each and every battle they fought while she was away ended in their defeat. While most have enough resources to build an army or defence systems to keep away even the strongest enemies they refuse to do so, relying solely on the good witch,” she concluded, seating herself on one of the imposing chairs at a large table. The observation room used to be the dining room, before she deemed it useless since she had no one to invite, so she had it transformed to the room where she unveiled her plans. “This is interesting,” Amanda mumbled while taking out a used piece of paper with a table that had numbers and names. She compared it with other papers spread across the large table. “After every great hero’s defeat, the kingdoms they served proved to be weaker than their counterparts. Same goes with highly intelligent or deeply devoted rulers. Look, when the leader left in a long quest, most of the time someone wicked seized the power, the resistance of the people being insignificant. Maybe this is it: good makes people weak, while evil makes them strong.”
            The witch rose suddenly from her seat. Everything became as clear as day. She had been living a lie.

            “Evil is good and good is evil,” she repeated endlessly as she dashed to the potion room, all the way to the other end of the manor. There she began brewing several potions at the same time. “Naturally. I have never been evil. I was always good: I helped people achieve their dreams of strengthening their spirit and their soul. The Crimson Witch was all a lie. Sure, there was my late husband, but I’m sure that he was happier when he died than most of his servants. What do you think, Dwarf?” she asked, while looking over her shoulder. Realising she was all alone, she focused on brewing potions quietly. In order to prove she was still the most intelligent witch in the realm, she had to drastically change her public image. 

Sunday 3 November 2013

Halloween post: Thought process and delay

You know how I promised you a Halloween-themed story this week? Unfortunately I don't have it done, but not due to laziness. I just couldn't answer my own questions.
Here is a record of the thought process that has led 2 days ago to a coherent summary:
Why did the Wicked witch become bad?
Love? Too typical. The story of a villain reforming due to love has been done and re-done for so many times it is unoriginal and uninteresting.
Loneliness? I use that too much in my stories. Besides, loneliness is a good reason for turning evil, but not good.
........ umm... what else?
No reason? That would be good, giving me a good chance to build a random character. One of those fascinating, unpredictible characters.
.... I don't have a proper action. What could be?
I know! Good is bad and bad is good. Wait, what? Yes. The witch came to realise that what she believed is evil is actually good, so she reasons that what she believed is good is actually the real evil. What about that?
. . .  Still, I need a summary. I have no idea. Let me start writing and see where I end up. Ah, a 15 lines about how lonely she is. When did I even come up with Amanda? Did my subconscious watch Diagnosis Murder again?
Okay, okay, Let's see...
So Amanda is evil and a witch. What does she do?
She kidnaps royalties for ransom. She casts spells to her benefit. She mistreats her underlings.
But what's the normal consequence? Do they admit their defeat? Most likely they become stronger and tougher to win against. So Amanda realises she's actually helped them.
Now what?
How does she reform?
What will she do?
Will my story have an actual plot?
I almost have an answer to these questions, but to find out, wait until I finally manage to finish writing the actual story. Definitely before Saint Andrew's Day, for which I'm planning supernatural posts and a story with vampires, undead, witches, maybe ghosts... (which I'll start writing with more than 4 days before the deadline...)
Any way, to find out Amanda's story, join me next week, either on Tuesday or on Thursday.